Saturday, May 06, 2006

The Machine, (From draft 4-27)

The Machine

I don't give up
you're not here for me
just these words
they will ring true
it is enough

pointing out as you did
there was no other way and it's true
we get there someway- and- it's true

please now sip- then drink wholly
the moment is now
it is for you, and I'm glad you're here
and that's great- I will be "genuine."

when I fear
it's about love
do I have it or not
do I get it at all
do I understand
I just don't know most of the time.

I would stand
when the shit fell down
right in the way
this kills me inside
those things were done
are happening now
as I'm here with my pen, later my voice

if that seems hard
look at yourself now look towards me
and see me reaching

the machine no longer deserves our rage
passed it by- to remove the ugliness from my view
posted phrases of discontent from peace
as anymore was ever
only part of the ugliness I've tried
I put aside.

Maybe you know
things about me- somethings- for sure
but there is no all
this hurt so much
I took the moment then
and made the day
I didn't cry- hardly noticed myself
then I was angry.

Jere 2006

2 comments:

earthkissed said...

Hey Jere, thanks for the comment on your blog, have been enjoying reading your writing, and will certainly keep dropping by as I have time to read back through what you've written in the past.

earthkissed said...

That was supposed to be "the comment on my blog"... my head is a little hazy from night duty!

 A scene where the protaganist places sticker under and on things that snoopy peopel would inspect.